Poems

These poems are Pantoums and here they are:

The Beach

As I meander along the beach
The waves beat the sand
Ships glide past
Sand in my shoes

The waves beat the sand
 As Orcas lazily glade past
Sand in my shoes
The smell of the sea breeze

As Orcas lazily glide past
White horses gallop
The smell of the sea breeze
Sea spray in my face

White horses gallop
Dried seaweed on the shore
Sea spray in my face
Waves creeping up the beach

Dried seaweed on the shore
Dolphins jump and dive
Waves creeping up the beach
A stretch of endless water, blue

Dolphins jump and dive
Ships glide past
A stretch of endless water, blue
As I meander along the beach






Wish On A Star


An endless of stretch of stars
Countless twinkling lights
A blanket of darkness
The moon a torch

Countless twinkling lights
A shooting star
The moon torch
Make a wish

A shooting star
The heavens above
Make a wish
As others sleep

The heavens above
Soon morning but for now
A blanket of darkness
An endless stretch of stars





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